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[luvkeylinn]

Hi everyone!! I saw a lot of members posting their song covers and I decided I want to post my own song covers too

 

drivers license by Olivia Rodrigo 

 

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https://voca.ro/1nGG8peghO7D

 

wish you were gay by Billie Eilish

 

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 https://voca.ro/18QL1rFF3Ccp

 

disclaimer: I did this for fun. I know my singing voice isn't that great lol. I know my voice is quite shaky ;3

 

I would appreciate any tips to improve my singing.

 

Thanks for listening! <3

Edited by luvkeylinn, 09 February 2021 - 09:29 AM.

[Jellie]

Hi! It's so great your working on singing haha I love music- but I suck at singing haha lol

You are much more talented than me lolll so don't take wtvr i say the wrong way cuz uh i suck at giving any sort of advice lmao and I am terrible at singing too so... heehee-

also- disclaimer: i know nothing about singing lmao what i write is just based on my watching RoomieOfficial haha

 

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i think this would sound a bit better if you work on the making your voice less shaky because I think it'll help you a lot when reaching other notes because like shaking can change the note a little   (but the shakiness kinda matched the vibe of the billie eilish song )-but then again, don't listen to me cuz i know nothing lmao

heehee if I didn't say this already- YOURE GOOD AT SINGING!!!

really

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lmao sorry if this was a very long and stupid response haha i dont know anything about singing so- honestly take my word as a grain of salt- hehe

T-T and i dont mean to hurt ur feelings btw... pls dont take it the wrong way lol eeeeep im so paranoid rn lol

EEEEEP sorry if any of this hurt ur feelings- i wasnt trying to T-T

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maybe ill just delete this kekeke

[luvkeylinn]

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Hi! It's so great your working on singing haha I love music- but I suck at singing haha lol

You are much more talented than me lolll so don't take wtvr i say the wrong way cuz uh i suck at giving any sort of advice lmao and I am terrible at singing too so... heehee-

also- disclaimer: i know nothing about singing lmao what i write is just based on my watching RoomieOfficial haha

 

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i think this would sound a bit better if you work on the making your voice less shaky because I think it'll help you a lot when reaching other notes because like shaking can change the note a little   (but the shakiness kinda matched the vibe of the billie eilish song )-but then again, don't listen to me cuz i know nothing lmao

heehee if I didn't say this already- YOURE GOOD AT SINGING!!!

really

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lmao sorry if this was a very long and stupid response haha i dont know anything about singing so- honestly take my word as a grain of salt- hehe

T-T and i dont mean to hurt ur feelings btw... pls dont take it the wrong way lol eeeeep im so paranoid rn lol

EEEEEP sorry if any of this hurt ur feelings- i wasnt trying to T-T

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maybe ill just delete this kekeke

 

Thanks for your tips and compliments!! I do need to practice more because my voice is pretty shaky ;3

 

You didn't hurt my feelings at all! I appreciate your honesty! Thanks! <33

[Jellie]

Thanks for your tips and compliments!! I do need to practice more because my voice is pretty shaky ;3

 

You didn't hurt my feelings at all! I appreciate your honesty! Thanks! <33

hehe ok phew

T-T I liked your choice of songs lmao <3

[ajuniceuhamsters]

Hi everyone!! I saw a lot of members posting their song covers and I decided I want to post my own song covers too

 

drivers license by Olivia Rodrigo 

 

Spoiler

https://voca.ro/1nGG8peghO7D

 

wish you were gay by Billie Eilish

 

Spoiler

 https://voca.ro/18QL1rFF3Ccp

 

disclaimer: I did this for fun. I know my singing voice isn't that great lol. I know my voice is quite shaky ;3

 

I would appreciate any tips to improve my singing.

 

Thanks for listening! <3

hiiiiii

 

can i critique with some tips? my vocal coach taught me sooo many good ones that can help

[ajuniceuhamsters]

ok so anyway, here's what I would say as a singer that's taken lessons

 

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firstly, quite of few parts are pitchy, especially in your higher register. to work on this, singing scales, sight reading, and singing back what you hear can help improve staying on pitch.

 

secondly, your voice is rather shaky. based on what i heard, this is probably based on bad air flow/breath control and confidence. increase your airflow by taking deeper breaths, and sing out 'fuller'. don't use such an airy tone, and sing out more clear and loud to improve the shakiness. also, you are singing really airy, and unfortunately it is the bad type of airy. singing in this style of airy when you could sing out full (since you are in your lower mix and chest voice) really damages your vocal chords. an example of a bad type of airy is bts v in the truth untold, and good airy is more like jk in truth untold.

 

thirdly, SING WITH MORE CONFIDENCE!!!! i know it might be hard to sing louder and fuller with more confidence when your parents/siblings would be questioning why (keke i get this all the time), but maybe stay in a quieter place in your house, away from other people, and sing out louder and fuller. This will improve your shakiness, breath control, improve airyness and make you sound more confident

 

im sorry if i hurt your feelings...just trying to give advice

[luvkeylinn]

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ok so anyway, here's what I would say as a singer that's taken lessons

 

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firstly, quite of few parts are pitchy, especially in your higher register. to work on this, singing scales, sight reading, and singing back what you hear can help improve staying on pitch.

 

secondly, your voice is rather shaky. based on what i heard, this is probably based on bad air flow/breath control and confidence. increase your airflow by taking deeper breaths, and sing out 'fuller'. don't use such an airy tone, and sing out more clear and loud to improve the shakiness. also, you are singing really airy, and unfortunately it is the bad type of airy. singing in this style of airy when you could sing out full (since you are in your lower mix and chest voice) really damages your vocal chords. an example of a bad type of airy is bts v in the truth untold, and good airy is more like jk in truth untold.

 

thirdly, SING WITH MORE CONFIDENCE!!!! i know it might be hard to sing louder and fuller with more confidence when your parents/siblings would be questioning why (keke i get this all the time), but maybe stay in a quieter place in your house, away from other people, and sing out louder and fuller. This will improve your shakiness, breath control, improve airyness and make you sound more confident

 

im sorry if i hurt your feelings...just trying to give advice  

 

Hi!! Thanks for your advice!!

 

I think because of how shaky my voice is and how I'm kinda not being confident enough is why my singing isn't that great. 

 

I will definitely try to improve and practice more! 

 

And no you didn't hurt my feelings! Thanks again! <33

[luvkeylinn]

Hi everyone!! Here's a cover of Butterfly by BTS <3

 

I sang in English instead of Korean because my Korean isn't that great ;3

 

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 https://voca.ro/11vRy4YhB5g8

 

I love that song so much. It means so much to me <33

 

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 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCSOXVt1q9mqEJWzCfHoeMWQ <--- I sang the English lyrics from one of their videos from their channel <3

[Jellie]

 

The shakiness already got so much better! <333

This one is really gooooooodddddd :DDDDDD

[ssandalgi]

Hi everyone!! Here's a cover of Butterfly by BTS <3

 

I sang in English instead of Korean because my Korean isn't that great ;3

 

Spoiler

 https://voca.ro/11vRy4YhB5g8

 

I love that song so much. It means so much to me <33

 

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 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCSOXVt1q9mqEJWzCfHoeMWQ <--- I sang the English lyrics from one of their videos from their channel <3

Awwwwwwww you sang Butterfly! I agree, with Jellie, the shakiness got better! At this rate you'll improve super fast lolll

<3

[ajuniceuhamsters]

Hi everyone!! Here's a cover of Butterfly by BTS <3

 

I sang in English instead of Korean because my Korean isn't that great ;3

 

Spoiler

 https://voca.ro/11vRy4YhB5g8

 

I love that song so much. It means so much to me <33

 

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 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCSOXVt1q9mqEJWzCfHoeMWQ <--- I sang the English lyrics from one of their videos from their channel <3

hi again luvkeylinn

<3

 

so air control and shakiness is slightly better in this, which is great! continue to work on your singing and you'll improve a lot!

ps-since you're a kpop fan, the youtuber justin burke reacts to a lot of kpop songs, hes a vocal coach too. so if you want some tips on a specific song, see if he reacted to it! another person similar to him is adam mishan. (i tool lesson from him before) he also react to kpop songs

[ajuniceuhamsters]

Hi everyone!! Here's a cover of Butterfly by BTS <3

 

I sang in English instead of Korean because my Korean isn't that great ;3

 

Spoiler

 https://voca.ro/11vRy4YhB5g8

 

I love that song so much. It means so much to me <33

 

Spoiler

 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCSOXVt1q9mqEJWzCfHoeMWQ <--- I sang the English lyrics from one of their videos from their channel <3

hi again luvkeylinn

<3

 

so air control and shakiness is slightly better in this, which is great! continue to work on your singing and you'll improve a lot!

ps-since you're a kpop fan, the youtuber justin burke reacts to a lot of kpop songs, hes a vocal coach too. so if you want some tips on a specific song, see if he reacted to it! another person similar to him is adam mishan. (i tool lesson from him before) he also react to kpop songs

[Alis]

 

That was great! Good job!

[luvkeylinn]

The shakiness already got so much better! <333

This one is really gooooooodddddd :DDDDDD

 

Thank you! <33

 

Awwwwwwww you sang Butterfly! I agree, with Jellie, the shakiness got better! At this rate you'll improve super fast lolll

<3

 

Lol thanks!! <33 and Butterfly is such a beautiful song

 

hi again luvkeylinn

<3

 

so air control and shakiness is slightly better in this, which is great! continue to work on your singing and you'll improve a lot!

ps-since you're a kpop fan, the youtuber justin burke reacts to a lot of kpop songs, hes a vocal coach too. so if you want some tips on a specific song, see if he reacted to it! another person similar to him is adam mishan. (i tool lesson from him before) he also react to kpop songs

 

Thanks, I'll check them out!! <33

 

That was great! Good job!

 

Thank you Alis!! <33

[luvkeylinn]

Hi everyone!! I did an English song cover of Make it Right by BTS (ft. Lauv)

 

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 https://voca.ro/16aLkFlNZdzb

 

I really like the rap parts ;3

 

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 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCSOXVt1q9mqEJWzCfHoeMWQ/videos<--- link to where I get the lyrics <3