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[Thatfuzballufound]

Hai guys!

I am writing a story called Belly ache. If you wanna know the plot, its about 2 young people who happen to meet each other in school and slowly become the best of friends, soon enough, the anxiety of exams and report cards and test scores starts to seep in to one of our main characters, pushing them away from the other one, but they still try and try to help them. They both realise that maybe that there was some feelings for each other bubbling away under the surface. Suddenly, the main character cracks, sending them into a downwards spiral...

 

*me trying so hard not to give away anything*

 

The first chapter will be up in 10 minutes or so after this is posted!

 

                                                                          Here are our characters:

 

 Adora

 

                 (ImAgIne ThoSe Two Cut ToGetHer I cOUlN'T fInd The RiGhT pERsOn AnD faCE)

 

 Some info on her :P

~Her dad walked out when she was 4, leaving her mother, a business woman, alone with just Adora.

~She goes by the name A.J, for Adora jade.

~ She's 15 - In year 10

~Her star sign is Cancer

~Her mother isn't home often.

~She is Alt

~She is Bi.

~Her pronouns are She/her or they/them.

 

 

Charlotte

 

Some info on her 0'-'0

~Her family are all very successful so she feels pressured to be like them.

~ she goes by the name Lotte 

~ She's 14 - In year 9

~ Her star sign is Taurus 

~ Her grandmother is the most caring.

~ Her pronouns are She/her or they/them.

 

(those are the two main characters )

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oooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!

<3

 

 

sorry for so many 'o's

[Thatfuzballufound]

Chapter 1

I gripped the phone. My stomach churned. There it was again, that sinking, soul crushing, belly ache.

“Bye,” I whispered into the speaker. I could hear her choking back tears as she screamed into the phone. Click. The murky depths below crashed against the stilts of the bridge. The cars surrounded me, the noise utter chaos. I put my phone down on the rusty iron bars surrounding the edge. Skilfully, I crept onto the other side.” What was I doing?” I asked myself. I knew I had gone too far, there was no way I could go back now. Regrets shrouded my thoughts as I looked up into the night sky. There was one star, it shone weakly against the dark blanket of night around it. It was small, useless and weak, just like me. I took one last breath, wiped away my tears and jumped

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OMG IT SO AMAZING <3

Plz write more sooooooooonnnnnnnn!!!!!

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[luvkeylinn]

This is so interesting! I would like more please! <3

[Poptart~]

This is amazing <3

Write more plzzzzzzz!!!

[Thatfuzballufound]

Chapter 2:

Adora with the red hair:

My eyes were fixed on the large leather chair that sat dominantly in the head teacher’s office. Mr Royale was speaking to me but I couldn’t make out the words coming from his lips, he was inaudible. I knew it was about my hair. Red. It was red. What they don’t know is that I never meant for this, my hair, to happen. I had cut most of it off the night before and dyed it red, I just felt… ya know, stressed. I’m sick of GCSE’s, the only thing that I am told is “If you don’t get a good score, you will never be successful”. It’s a pain, every test is. As my thoughts lingered on, I knew I was about to snap back into reality sometime soon, but I couldn’t help wondering what the grouch Infront of me was going on about. 

“Adora, are you listening to me, ADORA!” Mr Royale said sternly, his gaze fixed at me. There it was, I had slowly come back round to reality. I nodded my head subtly and tried to focus on whatever the grumpy man was saying.

“As a punishment, you will get a detention, and if it’s not dyed back next week, I will have to contact your mother,” I stared at him grimly. Not like she hasn’t been home in a week. 

 

“You’re dismissed,” his gruff voice cut through the silence. I had made it halfway to the door, reaching for the brass handle.
“Oh, also Adora, as a part of your punishment, there’s a new year nine coming in look after them,” 

[Thatfuzballufound]

Chapter 2:

Adora with the red hair:

My eyes were fixed on the large leather chair that sat dominantly in the head teacher’s office. Mr Royale was speaking to me but I couldn’t make out the words coming from his lips, he was inaudible. I knew it was about my hair. Red. It was red. What they don’t know is that I never meant for this, my hair, to happen. I had cut most of it off the night before and dyed it red, I just felt… ya know, stressed. I’m sick of GCSE’s, the only thing that I am told is “If you don’t get a good score, you will never be successful”. It’s a pain, every test is. As my thoughts lingered on, I knew I was about to snap back into reality sometime soon, but I couldn’t help wondering what the grouch Infront of me was going on about. 

“Adora, are you listening to me, ADORA!” Mr Royale said sternly, his gaze fixed at me. There it was, I had slowly come back round to reality. I nodded my head subtly and tried to focus on whatever the grumpy man was saying.

“As a punishment, you will get a detention, and if it’s not dyed back next week, I will have to contact your mother,” I stared at him grimly. Not like she hasn’t been home in a week. 

 

“You’re dismissed,” his gruff voice cut through the silence. I had made it halfway to the door, reaching for the brass handle.
“Oh, also Adora, as a part of your punishment, there’s a new year nine coming in look after them,” 

Also, I would like to say sorry about how small the paragraph is <3

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it so amazing 

i still dont get why some schools have rules agenst hair dying and boys having long hair

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Next chapter?

[Poptart~]

More?

[luvkeylinn]

More? Is there? Please?.. 

[Thatfuzballufound]

Hi everyone

Im back! im really sorry for not updating.

I unfortunately won't be adding more chapters to this story, but I will be hopefully (if I remember) making a new story, which is basically this (same title + same first chapter) but with different characters and development!

 

I'll have to like all the comment because I didn't post in months and  

 

Anyway Hi +bye