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[~Blumenkrone~]

"Days on repeat, repeat, repeat

As soon as someone holds my hand i fall in

 Drowning  Drowning  Drowning  Drowning  

Running out of oxygen 

Surface slips farther and farther

Out of reach out of reach

Must be a security breach 

Chaos ensues in my simple mind

No one understands 

Judgement ensues

I wish i could go back

"

[Jellie]

eheheheehhe is it ok if i dont get the reference.... i think its a reference...

cuz im rlly lost ahhhahah lol :P

[~Blumenkrone~]

eheheheehhe is it ok if i dont get the reference.... i think its a reference...
cuz im rlly lost ahhhahah lol :P

It’s mainly about my brain dragging me deeper into a ton of <poop>

[Jellie]

Aw I’m sorry

[ajuniceuhamsters]

 

"Days on repeat, repeat, repeat

As soon as someone holds my hand i fall in

 Drowning  Drowning  Drowning  Drowning  

Running out of oxygen 

Surface slips farther and farther

Out of reach out of reach

Must be a security breach 

Chaos ensues in my simple mind

No one understands 

Judgement ensues

I wish i could go back

"

 

why does this remind me of lyrics i wrote for a song a while back-

 

anyway, is this a verse, bridge, chorus or breakdown? 

[~Blumenkrone~]

why does this remind me of lyrics i wrote for a song a while back-

anyway, is this a verse, bridge, chorus or breakdown?

1st verse

[~Blumenkrone~]

QUARANTINE 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stairs to the 2nd floor

Just like we’ve always had before 

It’s all looking so blue

Same wall same floors

Voices spinning around me never change

Mask, Gloves, sanitization

Oh what i did do

 Oh what i did do 

What did i do

 

 

 

When will it all end? 

Nothing in sight

When will it all be over?

The death toll rises

Don’t tell me, I already know

Don’t go outside, Don’t go outside

How much longer can I take it?

Another 4 weeks or until i can foresee

How did i get here

I just want out

Someone let me out

Soon?

 

 

People slipping away

Crossing fingers hoping this will all fade

Fade away

People look to be doing so well

Kinda hard to believe there's more than just me

Maybe i’m just too young

I should be doing fine

Healthy and well

...Healthy and well

 

 

 

When will it all end? 

Nothing in sight

When will it all be over?

The death toll rises

Don’t tell me, I already know

Don’t go outside, Don’t go outside

How much longer can I take it?

Another 4 weeks or until i can foresee

 

 

 

 

6 feet, away or under

I can hardly tell anymore

I just wish that would shrink

I miss being known

I miss the 5:45 wake up

I miss the rainy days

I can’t see it every again

 

 

 

When will it all end? 

Nothing in sight

When will it all be over?

The death toll rises

Don’t tell me, I already know

Don’t go outside, Don’t go outside

How much longer can I take it?

Another 4 weeks or until i can foresee

How did i get here

I just want out

Someone let me out

Soon?

Edited by ~Blumenkrone~, 19 February 2021 - 06:08 AM.

[Jellie]

Wowwwww
:3

Spoiler

hmmm maybe u could change one of the ‘away’ s in the “People slipping away...” part?
That way it doesn’t seem too repetitive at the ends because there are two aways in that verse~
Idk ehehhhe its good <3
I think if u added some subtle rhymes it could be good too... myehehhehehh idkk

[Corycolbert]

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[Whitewhiskers]

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Go away troll

 

Don’t tap da link guys

[moosiakdefrogosa]

 Hi there. I want to be honest here. Writing a song isn't THAT difficult! If you have a musical education, you need four chords, a basic melody, and some simple lyrical phrases. But this song wouldn`t be truly memorable. To make it really good you need a hard-won talent. You can also ask someone https://writingmetier.com/extended-essay-writing-service/else to write it for you. But it is not the same when you write it yourself. 

Edited by moosiakdefrogosa, 08 April 2022 - 04:58 PM.