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#1 Tiny Ball Of Fuzz

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Posted 04 February 2021 - 05:05 AM

Hello! I was looking through everyone's amazing stories, and I thought that since I like writing, maybe I should try.... And so, that's how this happened. (I know it's really short...)

 

Chapter 1

Ow! I was thrown back into my tank for what was probably the hundredth time. Rejected again. I hobbled over to my food bowl, even though I didn’t feel like eating. Stuffed my cheek pouches. Crawled back into my cramped hide. Emptied my pouches, and curled up, hoping to snatch a few minutes of rest before the next person to reject me came along. I waited, sure the hide would be yanked away any second. Finally, I relaxed, and drifted away into sleep. When I woke again, I was thirsty and hungry. Very hungry. Why hadn’t I eaten anything the day before? I dug into my stash. Hay pellets, more hay pellets, and yet more hay pellets. Yuck. But it was the only food, so I stuffed myself anyways, and walked over to my water bottle, deciding to take the risk of someone noticing the noise, and clawing me out of my tank. Click, click, click, click. No one yet. Click click. A face appeared at the glass. It had approached silently, and I hadn’t heard it over my water bottle. I dashed back into my hide. I heard the voice of one of the staff, filling the face’s head up with nonsense. “These guys are happiest in groups. Here’s a nice cage, so pretty! A princess castle!” Total junk. I like to be alone, thank you, and that cage is the size of my paw! “No, no.” said a new voice, probably belonging to the face that had popped up at the glass. “I’ve done my research. I have a cage, and everything I need. Could I see this guy?” A gentle tap on the glass. “Sure.” said the employee. I heard the click of the key in the lock to my cage, and the tank slid out from the shelf. Now I was interested. I peeked out of my hide, just in time to see the employee reach for my hide. I dodged back inside. “No!” It was the new voice again. I peered out to see the new person reach inside a bag. And then, then there was the most beautiful smell on Earth. I’d smelled it once before, taken a single bite, only to have it snatched away. Now, could I taste it again? A hand reached into my tank, slowly and gently, offering something, the source of the wonderful smell. Next, a tiny cage came in. I jumped back. There was no way was I going in there! But, if it meant getting chosen, like all my siblings before me, and getting the wonderful smell… I took a tentative step forward. The hand, still moving slowly, placed the smell just inside the tiny cage. A treat. Now I remembered. That smell was called ‘treat’.  I ran forwards, up the ramp and into the cage. If I was going, I didn’t want to be clawed out impatiently. The cage was lifted out of the tank. The new face, and hopefully my new owner,  peered in at me. I looked down at myself. I wish I’d had time for a bath before this. The face’s mouth curved up in a smile. “She’s beautiful.” Said the new face.

 

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Posted 04 February 2021 - 05:35 AM

 

 

Ahhh! I love this story!

It sounds great


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Posted 04 February 2021 - 06:15 AM

really good story :veryhappy:



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Posted 04 February 2021 - 06:43 AM

hehe sounds good <3 will follow



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Posted 04 February 2021 - 06:52 AM

Ack this story is so cute and detailed! Followed~



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Posted 04 February 2021 - 09:42 PM

Ahhh! I love this story!

It sounds great

 

 

really good story :veryhappy:

 

 

hehe sounds good <3 will follow

 

 

Ack this story is so cute and detailed! Followed~

 

Thanks a lot, another thing I forgot to mention is that any feedback is welcomed, I'm still learning to write. Next chapter coming soon!


Edited by Tiny Ball Of Fuzz, 04 February 2021 - 09:42 PM.


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Posted 04 February 2021 - 09:47 PM

Does anyone have name ideas for the hamster and her owner? Both of them are girls, and the hamster is a winter white dwarf hybrid.


Edited by Tiny Ball Of Fuzz, 04 February 2021 - 10:58 PM.


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Posted 04 February 2021 - 10:25 PM

Next chapter:

 

Chapter 2

When the cage started to move, I went crazy. I’d never been carried in a cage before! It’s such a weird swinging motion. I dove into a hide that had been placed inside the cage. It was so big! And the bedding, well, it was like lying on nothing. I sped out of the hide again, only to feel a breeze against my face, and so many strange smells. We got into a second cage on wheels, and a strap was fastened across my cage. Then the second cage began to move on its own. It started out slowly, then got faster and faster, until we were going as faster than I’d ever gone on my wheel, but unlike on my wheel, there was no wind ruffling my fur, so I supposed the cage was sealed. Eventually I got used to the moving, and I no longer thought it strange that there was no wind. I dozed off, only to be awakened by the door to the second cage slamming. Then I felt more wind, as a door beside me was opened. How many doors did this cage have? I was hefted out of the moving cage, and carried into a different cage, this one with all kinds of yummy smells, the treat smell among them. The treat! In my excitement of being taken home, I’d forgotten about the treat! I ran over, hoping...Yes! It was still there! I ate it all while we moved to another section of the cage. Then, my owner, (I have an owner now!) tipped the hide so that I could climb into it. I looked at her, confused. Sure, I didn’t like this tiny cage, but it was home, wasn’t it? “Go on,” the voice said soothingly. I took a step forward. Then another. I climbed into the hide, and I was flying! The hide was set down in another cage. I can’t even say how big this cage was! It was, like, huge! I sniffed something near me. Food. I picked it up, and tasted it. The striped shell wasn’t so good, but the insides... Delightful! I tried another seed. The same. I stuffed more seeds whenever I found them. I’d get to try them all! Then I looked up from my foraging. I could see the owner’s face at the glass, and smell what I now knew was her scent. She smiled again. I loved it when she smiled. It made me feel like I did something good. I crawled around some more, walking through a tunnel and looking so confused when I came out the other side, that the owner laughed. It was even better than her smile. I really did do something good! I found tunnels, sticks coated in a different type of treat, but that still smelled great, a hanging tower of nuts that I chewed at for a little while, swinging around in funny positions that made the owner laugh again. And lastly, the greatest thing of all! Another type of chew shape, but this one, it was flavored all the way through! “You like the whimzee, huh?” I jumped. It was the first time she’d spoken since when I was in the tank with the hay pellets. I took the ‘whimzee’ and tugged it into the closest hide. It was filled with the same soft bedding as the tiny cage, But this bedding was many hamsters deep, and the hide was even bigger! I burrowed right in, made a little nest room, and emptied my cheek pouches. Then I crawled back up, and grabbed some soft white strips, and put them in my nest room. Then I collapsed into the pile, and slept. And guess what? No one woke me up to grab me, and toss me back into my cage!


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Posted 05 February 2021 - 01:41 AM

Does anyone have name ideas for the hamster and her owner? Both of them are girls, and the hamster is a winter white dwarf hybrid.

 

Hamster names: Snowball, Dove, Swan, Winter, Coconut

 

Owner names: Daisy, Stacy, Julie, Sophia

 

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Posted 05 February 2021 - 01:58 AM

Hamster names: Snowball, Dove, Swan, Winter, Coconut

 

Owner names: Daisy, Stacy, Julie, Sophia

 

:)

Those are great names! I'm always bad at naming things...



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Posted 05 February 2021 - 03:12 AM

Here's the next two chapters:

 

Chapter 3

Now I know what life is actually supposed to be like. I have a giant wheel, giant hide, giant cage, giant everything! My owner still hasn’t touched me, but that’s nice, I’m still settling in, so I’m glad she doesn’t claw me out of this wonderful cage. It doesn’t even feel like a cage! I’ve expanded my burrow quite a bit more, so that now I can run from one side of my cage to the other underground. The whimzee is almost completely gone, even though I’ve tried so hard to savour it. The other day, I stumbled upon something new! (That’s how big my cage is!) It’s a tray filled with some sand. I dug in it for a while,  but then had an idea. I rolled over again, and again, and again, and again… After that I felt so clean! Cleaner than my paws, or even mom had ever made me! It had been a week since the owner brought me home to my cage, and for the first time, she was opening my cage! I had been getting bored recently, after I had claimed everything in my cage and discovered everything, so I was happy that there would be something new to do. The owner offered me an empty box. This was like the day at the tank with hay pellets, (Hey, I really hate those pellets), with the tiny cage! I stepped inside the box confidently. “Good girl” I could tell from the tone of her voice she was happy with me. The box was carried away, up some steps cut into the owner’s cage, and into a new room. She set me down in a giant, smooth white cage with a towel, food scattered around, and some of my toys, (Aha! That’s where those went!) and sat down in there too. I thought I was supposed to sit, so I did. We had a staring contest. I won easily. I finally decided that if she wasn’t going to do anything, I would. I scampered towards a walnut, one of my favourites. Tasty. One of those striped seeds was next. Then flax, then a few oats, and so on. I carried on eating seeds and nuts until I looked up and saw that I was right in front of the owner. She was smiling. I wondered that if I stepped closer, she’d laugh. I did. Then I stepped even closer. I put a paw on her leg. She laughed. I put another paw up. Her hand moved towards a seed. I jumped back, and she Picked up the seed, and offered it to me, just in front of me. I snatched it and gobbled it up in two bites. Then I looked up, as if to say, more? She took a piece of walnut, and offered it. I took it. Another seed, this one resting on her leg. I accept your challenge! Reaching up, two paws on her, I took it, pouching this one. An oat, placed higher up her leg. I’d have to climb up onto her to get to it. I gave her a wary glance. Now she looked worried, as if she thought I might run away at any second. That scared me. She’d always been so confident, especially that day when she stopped the employee. My brain was telling me to take that oat, cheer her up. However, my instincts had other ideas. Before I knew what I was doing, I was racing away from her, into my hide. I peeked out again, to see her looking disappointed. I wish I had taken that oat. What if she gives me away, or worse, back to the place with the hay pellets?

 

Chapter 4: Owner's Perspective

I really wish I hadn’t been so bold with her. I should have just let her get used to my voice and scent. I hated that pet store! Seriously, I don’t want that terrible cage, or my hamster having a terrible fear of humans because some employee couldn’t help tearing a hide off of that poor hamster. My friends are all asking me what I’m going to name her. Is it wrong to want to get to know a hamster before naming her? I guess I’ll try bathtub bonding again tomorrow.

 

- + - + -

 

Right now it’s 10:00 p.m. I’ve stayed up late so I can try bathtub bonding again This time, I want her to feel comfortable, so I’ve waited until she’s awake on her own. I placed the shoebox once more in her cage, waited for her to climb in, then carried her up to the bathroom. I let her go in the tub, but this time let her explore for a while before introducing myself. When I sat down, she scampered away, but almost immediately came back to sniff me. She seemed very confident, so I decided to place another oat on my leg. I love the feeling of those tiny paws on my leg. She took the oat and ate it, one paw still on me. She looked up with that begging look that seemed to say, ”more?” I gave her a walnut, then offered my finger for her to sniff. She smelled, then found a nearby flax seed, and made it disappear in less than two seconds. Another seed was set on my leg, and she came up again. I held my breath. It was in this position when she ran last time. She glanced my way, then placed her two paws on my leg once more, and proceeded to stretch longer that I thought was possible, trying to get the seed. Eventually she gave in, and placed her third and fourth paws on my leg, boosting herself up. After grabbing the pumpkin seed, she ran away as fast as her tiny legs could carry her, (which was pretty fast) to a hide I’d placed. I could hear her munching away, and after a while she poked her little nose out, and when I placed the shoebox in the tub, she ran in readily. I took this as a sign she was done for tonight, and honestly I was feeling pretty tired too. As soon as she was in her cage, she went right to her sand bath, and cleaned herself. I went to bed almost immediately after. Unfortunately, I didn’t sleep for some time, thanks to her running on her wheel like crazy. Maybe, I thought sleepily, she wasn’t that tired as in ‘I’m going to sleep now tired’ as she was tired of me.


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Posted 05 February 2021 - 03:31 AM

Hamster names: Snowball, Dove, Swan, Winter, Coconut

 

Owner names: Daisy, Stacy, Julie, Sophia

 

:)

:P my names sophia lmao

and i have a ww hybrid named jellie haha

 

I love where this story is going (:

 

 

for owner names maybe kat?

idk lol

and i agree with getting to know your hamster before naming them haha-


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Posted 05 February 2021 - 03:42 AM

 

 

Aww... this is such a sweet story!

 

 

Um... for names possibly:

Buttercup

Belle

Cupcake

Tiny

Pumpkin

 

for the girl uh...

Violet

Madeline

Olivia

Maybelle

Petunia

Evangeline

Diana

er...

yeah that's all I got- 


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Posted 05 February 2021 - 03:43 AM

:P my names sophia lmao

and i have a ww hybrid named jellie haha

 

I love where this story is going (:

 

 

for owner names maybe kat?

idk lol

and i agree with getting to know your hamster before naming them haha-

 

I know, right? the one time I chose a name before I actually got the hamster was with Nibbles, and I barely ever call him that...

 

Do you really know where this story is going? Also, the name of this story should be Advertising Hamster, not Show Hamster, because in the plot I have in my head, then the hamster doesn't go to any shows... So if that's where you think the story is going, then it's not... Sorry if that comes off as rude.


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Posted 05 February 2021 - 03:45 AM

Aww... this is such a sweet story!

 

 

Um... for names possibly:

Buttercup

Belle

Cupcake

Tiny

Pumpkin

 

for the girl uh...

Violet

Madeline

Olivia

Maybelle

Petunia

Evangeline

Diana

er...

yeah that's all I got- 

 

Hmmmm I like Maybelle, (maybe May for short?), and Tiny...


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