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#1 luvkeylinn

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Posted 16 September 2021 - 08:58 AM

Hello, it's me again with another trash story  :goodvibes:

 

Anyways, this new story is called Promise. (not me taking the title & title cover from my previous unfinished story xD)

 

I suck at making a summary but this story has drama, romance, angst, real-world problems, and mature topics.

The story is rated PG-13, but I will try to limit the amount of mature content involved in this story.

I will be adding trigger warnings if there's any sensitive topics. 

 

Okay, I know that without a summary you probably won't know what the heck you're about to read, but I can't make summaries due to the fact that I probably give too much away :') Anyways thanks so much if you give the story a shot. :)

 

*Disclaimer: I literally have written two stories before on HH and I have never been able to actually finish them due to school, writer's block, and lack of motivation. So I will not guarantee daily or maybe even weekly updates or the completion of this story. Sorry in advance  :sweatdrop:

 

Anyways here it goes...

 

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Promise

 

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Chapter One

Spoiler

 

Hope you liked it and thanks for reading! <3

Sorry for any mistakes.

Any comments or suggestions you have are greatly appreciated! :)


Edited by luvkeylinn, 29 January 2022 - 01:25 AM.

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Posted 16 September 2021 - 09:03 AM

Hello, it's me again with another trash story  :goodvibes:

 

Anyways, this new story is called Promise. (not me taking the title & title cover from my previous unfinished story xD)

 

I suck at making a summary but this story has drama, romance, angst, real-world problems, and mature topics.

The story is rated PG-13, but I will try to limit the amount of mature content involved in this story.

I will be adding trigger warnings if there's any sensitive topics. 

 

Okay, I know that without a summary you probably won't know what the heck you're about to read, but I can't make summaries due to the fact that I probably give too much away :') Anyways thanks so much if you give the story a shot. :)

 

*Disclaimer: I literally have written two stories before on HH and I have never been able to actually finish them due to school, writer's block, and lack of motivation. So I will not guarantee daily or maybe even weekly updates or the completion of this story. Anyways, sorry in advance  :sweatdrop:

 

Anyways here it goes...

 

~ ~

Promise

 

promise-1.jpg

 

 

Chapter One

Spoiler

 

Hope you liked it and thanks for reading! <3

Sorry for any mistakes.

Any comments or suggestions you have are greatly appreciated! :)

OMG IT'S SOOOOO GOOD. YOU SHOULD PUBLISH IT! No complaints LOL. Followed!


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Posted 16 September 2021 - 10:50 AM

I love this! PLEASE post more soon :begging:  :begging:


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Posted 16 September 2021 - 07:21 PM

Another <super>ing awesone work of masterpiece  I mean, story by Luvkeylinn! I love it and I also really like your writing style, and I'm glad it continued over the span of stories you've wrote before. Followed, and I'm really hoping that there's more soon!

 

No like seriously I've never been this invested in a story before I will personally check up on this topic everyday and reread the chapter over and over again until a new one's up

 

And there I go, rambling on because of how much I admire something *Eyeroll*


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Posted 16 September 2021 - 09:37 PM

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you so much for giving the first chapter a shot. I appreciate all your kind comments haha!! <33

 

I'm currently working on the second chapter now, but I'm not so sure when it'll be posted. Hopefully soon :)



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Posted 18 September 2021 - 10:32 AM

Chapter 2

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Sorry for any mistakes and thanks for reading! :)


Edited by luvkeylinn, 29 April 2022 - 12:57 PM.

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Posted 18 September 2021 - 06:16 PM

EMMA WATSON xD

 

Anyways, Jayden seems affection and loving enough, but IDK, I kind of get fishy vibes from that guy (Eg. Him being openly annoyed with her and most importantly telling her to wear a sweater over her clothes because of what her body may or may not be like) 

 

Anyhow, I really like where this story's going! Excited for more :D


Edited by Alis, 18 September 2021 - 06:16 PM.

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Posted 19 September 2021 - 02:13 AM

That was amazing! 

I mean, like, Emma Watson was the best choice lol!

...But, why?


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Posted 19 September 2021 - 02:24 AM

I know a Emma Watson irl 0-0

Great story!!!!

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Posted 19 September 2021 - 03:19 AM

That was amazing! 

I mean, like, Emma Watson was the best choice lol!

...But, why?

 

Thanks! And yes, I agree! <3

 

I'm confused, what do you mean by the 'why'? :)



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Posted 19 September 2021 - 03:58 AM

Thanks! And yes, I agree! <3

 

I'm confused, what do you mean by the 'why'? :)

Loool, yeah!

It was a joke, too. Its okay!


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Posted 26 September 2021 - 02:29 PM

Hello. Idk if anyone cares, but I just wanted to apologize for not posting the next chapter yet. :(

 

Life's been a little hectic lately. I do have the next chapter ready, but I'm just editing some things. I might post it tomorrow or on Monday!

 

I really appreciate everyone who reads and comments on my story! <3


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Posted 27 September 2021 - 12:51 PM

omg this is amazing sob can't believe i just started watching right now

i hate jayden end of story o-o 

 

Hello. Idk if anyone cares, but I just wanted to apologize for not posting the next chapter yet. :(

 

Life's been a little hectic lately. I do have the next chapter ready, but I'm just editing some things. I might post it tomorrow or on Monday!

 

I really appreciate everyone who reads and comments on my story! <3

 

don't stress out too much !! life does that way too much to me sob. looking forward to seeing it <3


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Posted 29 September 2021 - 10:14 AM

Chapter Three

 

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Sorry for taking so long to post the next chapter.

 

Thanks for reading and sorry for any mistakes!

:)

 


Edited by luvkeylinn, 19 January 2022 - 02:02 PM.

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Posted 29 September 2021 - 11:41 AM

petition to give isabella multiple hugs and a better boyfriend, or at least have jayden go through some character development :

sign here !!!!!! 


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