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Posted 25 December 2021 - 01:33 AM

Hey y'all! I Worte (this supposed to be) short story a couple weeks ago and decided to share it!

 

Snow and the Three other Elements'

 

For years Snow Kiokimie thought that she would never be anything, until one day someone proved her wrong. Or should I say people. On the last day of school Snow was walking down the hallway when a strange girl she didn’t recognize approached her.  “You.” The girl said pointing at Snow. “You need to come with me.” The girl then grabbed Snow with both her hands. Just then a boy rounded the corner. “Flower! Is this handling it?!”  He yelled rushing toward the strange girl, he pulled her back. “Wha-“ Snow looked around confused. “Leaf! What are you doing I had her!!!” Flower pushed against Leaf. Then a multitude of fresh spring flowers rushed through the windows like wind. “Flower!” Leaf yelled as the flowers incased him. “Stop it! Uck! The smell!!!”  Leaf flailed and kicked as even more flowers surrounded him.  Then right through the windows again came autumn leaves. In all shades of yellow, orange and red. The leaves and flowers seemed to be fighting, and Snow noticed that both Flower and Leaf had their eyes closed. Then a sudden burst of light illuminated the hallway. The light as bright as the sun itself. Both Leaf and Flower opened their eyes. “Enough!” Another girl yelled from the end of the hallway. “Guys, seriously! Get it together.” The girl screamed, as she did water droplets formed out pf thin air and moved quickly to separate Leaf and Flower. “Sol, do you mind?” Leaf said still shading his eyes from the light. “Oh, right!” Sol said giggling. With a wave of her hand the light and water disappeared. Sol walked up to Snow who was laying on the ground, utterly confused, and said “I’m not going to hurt you, but you need to come with me.” 

 

 

         Flower, Sol, and Leaf sat down at the other end of the table, facing Snow. “I bet you’re wondering what’s going on here.” Sol said rummaging through her backpack for a snack.  “Um, ya. Just a bit.” Snow said, eyes wide. “Well, uh.” Leaf turned to Flower and Sol. “How should we explain it?” Flower put her hands on the table. “So, you know how there are 4 seasons?” She asked. “Ya?” Snow questioned wondering if maybe Flower needed to go back to 1st grade. “And with every season comes something new?” She paused and looked around the room at everybody. “Spring brings flowers, Summer brings sun, and you know water. Autumn brings Leaves and Winter brings snow.” “Ohhhhh!!!” Snow said standing up. “I get it, your crazy-“ Then Snow tripped over her backpack strap and went twirling towards the printer. “Get her!” Sol screamed, but before anyone could do anything Snow landed on a soft, pillow of snow. The three friends stopped mid-air. “Oh?” Snow said sitting up. “When did this Snow get here?” she said looking around. The three let out whoops. “Wow!” Sol screamed. “She did it!!!!” Leaf said laughing. “I did- what?” Snow said looking around. “And here we were planning this whole escapade on how to get you to show your powers and you just tripped over your backpack!!!” Lead yelled laughing. “Sorry?” Snow asked. “HAHAHA!!!” The three laughed. “No-no. Sorry.” Flower said getting up off the floor. “This is just too funny!” Flower giggled. The three got up and sat at the table, trying to compose themselves. “Wait, did I make that snow ap-appear?” Snow asked. “Yes, you did. Winter.” Sol said smirking. “Winter?!” Snow said. “How-how do you know my middle name?” Snow asked looking down. “No one knows my middle name. Only my parents. And their de-dead.” Snow started sniffling. The three looked at each other. “Our middle names are kept quiet too, our parents thought that someone might find us. My middle name is Autumn, since I have the autumn element.” Leaf said, making a small little leaf fly into Snow’s hands. Sol spoke next, “And my middle name is Summer because I have the Summer elements.” She said making a little droplet of water sit on Snow’s nose. It popped sending water onto her face. “And I am Spring!” Flower said making a little flower weave into Snow’s hair. “And that means that I can-“ Snow hesitated. “Yes, you have snow and maybe even ice.” Leaf said. “We understand if this is a lot.” Sol said getting up. “Here, do you have a phone?” “Oh, um. Ya.” Snow said scrouging through her pockets. Snow felt a little weird having a boy’s number in her phone. “Also, you’ll have to transfer to our school.” Flower said smiling. “Wha-what?!” 

 

“You made it!” Sol said rushing toward Snow. “Yay!” Flower squealed excitedly. “Yes, I did! Also, what’s the deal with this dorky uniform?” Snow said gesturing to her clothes. “Oh, I dunno, I kinda like them.” Flower said. “At least we get to pick our own shoes.” Came a voice from behind them. “No one would know who we were.” Leaf said showing off his high-tops. Snow stared at them. They were scarlet red with little leaves all over them. Snow looked down and noticed Flower and Sol’s shoes. Flower’s high-tops were olive green with pick cherry blossom flower’s all over them, and Sol’s were bright yellow with little blue water droplets. “Um. Was I supposed to get customized shoes?” Snow said looking down at her old, worn down shoes. “Oh, no.” Sol said smirking at Flower. “We handled that.” Snow turned to Flower who was taking a little package out of her gym bag. When Snow opened it she gasped. In Pure white tissue paper were her high-tops. They were white too with little snowflakes all over them. Snow excitedly slipped off her old shoes and put on the new ones. They fit perfectly. “Thank you sooo much!” Snow said hugging Sol and Flower. Then she turned to Leaf. “Um, uh, Thanks she said, blushing. “You’re welcome.” Leaf said offering a fist bump. Snow fist bumped him back. Leaf then threw his arms over Snow and Flower’s shoulders. Guiding them into school he exclaimed, “This is going to be the best year ever!!”

 

 

The end… 

 

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Posted 26 January 2022 - 09:56 AM

Wow, what a trip that was! :]
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